Cool stuff as usual!


Work on the timing some.
You have everything happen at sort of the same speed.
Try to make separate moments that chain together.
Also the impact of him hitting the ground looks weak.
This is a result of you linearly moving him from start to finish: 1 -> 2 -> 3 -> 4 -> 5
Try moving him past where you want to stop: 1 -> 2 -> 3 -> 7 -> 5
This will add more visual force.
Experiment more with follow thru elements.
Use the hair and clothing to your advantage to imply motion.
Many other things could be improved, but no time to edit or comment.
« Last Edit: September 03, 2015, 09:18:07 pm by PixelPiledriver »

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