ice cream muncher [updated]

[yosh64]

hey



I just pixeled this guy today. I still haven't given him a complete polish and stuff, so I thinks you may find lots of things to improve on, but yea... any thoughts and advise would be nice . The proportions are pretty crazy , his hands are just massive . Well his right hand should be bigger than his left, I will hopefully fix that soon. I will probly end up changing the colors also, as I just used the palette from my Practise Dummy fighter.

Anyhows I hope yous like .

cyas

[yosh64]

hey

edited (changed ice cream a tad)


I just made his right hand bigger, and up'd the contrast .

cyas

[yosh64]

hey

edit (updated both again)
and <- color change

Just gave him a fair bit more polish, and fixed some things .

cyas

[AlexHW]

looks good, although a lot of the forms look very round except for the hands feet and head.
It makes it look like he is made up of various blobs.
I'd suggest studying the planes/surfaces of anatomy and look how they interact or transition into each other.
The hand on the left is my favorite part, mostly because of the clear hard planes and shape of it.

[Ryumaru]

i like it. its much more organic than your other pieces, but still has than angular shading look.

[Terley]

your work reminds me of playing this game on the sega, called ballz..

http://www.consoleclassix.com/gameinfo_ballz_gen.html

dunno why just the way it seems your characters are made out of certain shapes..

very nice again, but it could do with a bigger head, with better face detailing.

[Larwick]

Looks good. I reeeeeeaaaaaaaaaally like that hand. The main flaw on this i'd have to point out would be the icecream, as to me it just looks like sticky marbles in a cone. I'd give it more structure and have it leaning less. And i agree some of the shapes could be toned down a little. Nice work though, keep it up.