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Offline Motrox

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[WIP] West Bank

on: July 27, 2014, 10:30:54 pm
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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #1 on: July 28, 2014, 06:39:12 am
Maybe curve the writing across the wall to make it follow the perspective of the wall a little? The bottom (and top) of the wall follow curves - I think the writing would look better if it had a little perspective to it as well.

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #2 on: July 28, 2014, 03:17:42 pm
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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #3 on: July 28, 2014, 07:33:57 pm
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.
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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #4 on: July 30, 2014, 09:49:03 am
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.

Agreed. I like what you did with the cracks too.

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #5 on: October 15, 2014, 01:44:21 am
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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #6 on: October 25, 2014, 06:47:32 pm
Hmmm... I think some barbed wire would add even more irony to the piece.