Very nice. A few more thoughts
- To me, Cyangmou's skull looks better, partially because the eyes aren't such a huge feature and they don't end up looking like 0.o
- I like the new smoke
- There's a bit of noise in the form of two relatively isolated dark pixels on the nearest shoulderpad, which I think it would be better to change somehow.
- Cyangmou's breastplate hugs the ribs like a suit of armour, but your breastplate looks more flat, like the
crest/badge Norwegian officers used to wear on inspection. I don't know if any other countries have those, so it may not be a useful reference, but there you go
Nope - and you know that.
Why so serious?
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