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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #10 on: July 28, 2006, 08:08:31 am
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Just applied some finishing touches :).

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Just a change of colors :). Hmm, I might keep trying for something better.

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #11 on: July 28, 2006, 09:42:39 am
they are still way too short/small.  He looks as though one push to his upper body and he'd be down.

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #12 on: July 28, 2006, 10:59:16 am
His waist is much too small for such broad shoulders.
Nice, though.

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #13 on: July 28, 2006, 11:16:27 am
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@Xion Night: Ahh yea, I didn't realise that about his waste :-\. Hmm, I will think about changing.

@Feron: Sorry I find it hard to understand what you mean? Hmm, I actually thought of Ryu's stance when making (didn't actually use a reference, or even look into Ryu's stance before making). Anyhows comparing now, it seems pretty close, and even after reading what you say, I still feel happy with it, but I dunno?

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Ahh, I think I might need to change the direction of his right foot a tad.

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #14 on: July 28, 2006, 11:37:17 am
from the references you posted yourself, it's very clear that the shoudlers and chest and arms in your sprite are huge compared to the legs, and that there's an issue with the center of gravity, as was mentioned before. If for example, you full extend his arm downwards it reaches his knee

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #15 on: July 28, 2006, 11:45:10 am

@Feron: Sorry I find it hard to understand what you mean? Hmm, I actually thought of Ryu's stance when making (didn't actually use a reference, or even look into Ryu's stance before making). Anyhows comparing now, it seems pretty close, and even after reading what you say, I still feel happy with it, but I dunno?

I wasn't saying the stance was off balance - i meant that his upper-body is far too big for the legs. 

I quickly enlarged the bottom half in photoshop - this would be a more realistic size for the legs.
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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #16 on: July 28, 2006, 12:08:08 pm
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Thanks again for all the advise, well I actually just now seen your new posts (Helm and Feron). I did actually go ahead before and change his sholders, instead of enlarging his waste :), AND in the process I shortened his right arm :).

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Ahh, I think I might need to make his legs bigger now also.

cyas
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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #17 on: July 28, 2006, 12:16:07 pm
Short but sharp comment in myopinion: he will fall down, the moment he becomes a living character. The pose is lacking balance.
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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #18 on: July 28, 2006, 01:10:43 pm
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I think this is just about it, I mainly just shortened and made his body smaller, also in the process again made his right arm a tad smaller :).

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Hehe, I laugh now looking back at how rediculous he looked :).

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Re: practise dummy [edited again]

Reply #19 on: July 28, 2006, 01:18:33 pm
much better - but his waist still is too short.