The main thing missing is that for a basic run there is point where neither foot is in contact with the ground.
During a walk there is always at least one foot on the ground.
So what you have looks like a power walk.
Go outside and run around ----> no seriously.
Think about what it feels like.
Now power walk.
Think about what it feels like.
Why are they different?
Look up some videos.
Draw some stuff.
Here's a really quick edit.

Sorry, no time to edit drawings.
All I did was edit position.
Other things could be improved as well.
With the contact starting frame that you have his foot slides forward while on the ground.
I was able to remedy this by moving him off the ground, but it's not really an intentional solution.
You would have to change some of the drawings to better match the action at the current time.
« Last Edit: March 19, 2014, 03:52:58 am by PixelPiledriver »

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