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Offline Motrox

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Criticism Needed!

on: February 16, 2014, 02:41:18 am
Aye guys I'm new around here.. Well not very I've just lurked for more than a year now hah.
I'm looking for some opinions to make this piece the best that it can be.
An edit would be amazing  :D

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #1 on: February 16, 2014, 02:54:35 am
Here is a quick recolor. I added 2 more colors to the grass and lightened it up a bit for better readability.

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #2 on: February 16, 2014, 03:02:35 am
Thanks for the edit man  :y:

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #3 on: February 16, 2014, 09:11:12 am
If you're no longer working on this, since you submitted it to the PJ gallery in its present form, it's always good to let people know that you're not doing any more work on this. You know, just in case someone goes out of their way, spending a couple of hours on an edit that you may never use, because you've moved on to something else.

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/84073.htm

If, on the other hand, you're going to work more on this... you should probably have waited a bit before submitting it to that gallery  ;D

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #4 on: February 16, 2014, 11:36:23 am
Also you shouldn't just post other peoples' edits into galleries anyway. 8l
Also my art tumblr: ymedronart.tumblr.com

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #5 on: February 16, 2014, 11:45:43 am
Also you shouldn't just post other peoples' edits into galleries anyway. 8l
It's pretty close, yeah. But while he used the exact same colours for the grass, he left the statues as in his original, but put some more work into the textures, where |||| did a quick scribble to simulate the grass texture. And he did give credit, so... <shrug>

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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #6 on: February 16, 2014, 12:23:10 pm
Hm, my mistake, I remember seeing the details in the grass being exactly the same. :o
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Re: Criticism Needed!

Reply #7 on: February 16, 2014, 01:36:09 pm
I just needed some help on how to do the grass. Never used his edit btw. Just tried to do what he did using those 2 extra colors.

I'm done with this :)