Holiday tomorrow so no school. I also have mt.dew and Doritos some i'm good to pixel well into the night!
@Yaomon
I think tomorrow I'll ask for and look up references myself. I see things that are wrong, and it is a struggle to fix them, but I think overall the exercise is helping me think more critically to find solutions. A lot of going back over to find what works too. That being said another edit:

I brought her heel down to ground her more to the floor, trying for a heavy mid-run look.
Reduced her hips significantly, also trying to add in a hint of hipbone in there. Still need further refinement, it is remarkably hard to pixel nice curving hips.
Also made her head length and width smaller by a pixel, reduced the shoulder size and brought that whole group down a bit.
A question though, do ya'll like the head looking at the viewers left side of the screen(current revision), or the head looking to the viewers right side(previous revisions)? Leaning towards the left myself.
EDIT:
Messing around with flats. Just kinda happened upon "Scarlet Pool". Oh well, i'll role with it for awhile.