Captain America...and DP, I guess **Updated 07/21/06**

[Tremulant]

Zam!

Lief: Kept the dither (going for suit texture, cap's suit is scaly), changed left arm, buit had no idea what to do with it so... now he's even more gut-wrenchingly patriotic.

Feron: Fair enough I tried to up ythe highlighting on the pecs (and maybe the legs, I forget)... I'll be working on it.

_{Edit: forgot to bold the names.. my my!}

[Ryumaru]

its amazing that you can make a 4 color desighn(skin, white, red, blue) with only 8 colors, but i think keeping the colors so low is hurting your work. seeing as how you can make something like this, im betting you can do wonders with an added color or two.
also, a TINY bit more saturation would definitely help. the red is so unsaturated its brown.sometimes you need to do more then just "hint" at colors. 
anyways, your color conservation is amazing, and even tho i dont like this as much as some of your other works its still very awesome.

[Helm]

Check out your center of gravity on cap, he seems to be leaning forward a bit too much. Move the chest one pixel left, and the neck/head another, I think.

[InvaderLupus]

I think you should move his left leg a bit to the right. Cap always seems to stand with his legs spread a bit more, all dignified and such.

[Feron]

Where is your lightsource?  The shading on the head would suggest left, but the abs and his left leg would suggest right.  hmmm.

[Sohashu]

Top left.  well thats what I see at least. 

[Zach]

i made a few edits the main things i saw were the muscle groups n stuff, like in his left arm his bicep was all weird and unaligned, his torso was weird too, his six pack was bursting out making it show that he has like noo rib cage at all... which is the thing with super hero's they make them all busty and sticking their chest out, i'm not saying it's the most smartest thing to do with this but atleast show he has that pride spunk that most superhero do

[SolidIdea]

The jaws were too much not really human, and I didn't know how to say it so I made a quick edit over Lief's edit.
I think the shield should be bigger too.


EDIT:
Sorry Lief  . But I said it was a jaw-fix.

[lief]

liefs edit, not helms (this goes for the last two edits).

let him know what you are editing so you don't confuse the poor man.

[Tremulant]

Updated.

Ryumaru: Took your advice and upped the colour count. Still under 16, so I'm happy, and it's loads more smooth. Also, I pumped up the saturation a bit on the red.

Helm: Done and done, I think. He seems a bit more centred now, anyway.

InvaderLupus: Done.

Feron: Carelessness on my part  Fixed...?

Zach: Revamped the whole abdominal thing. Still probably off, but I took a shot at it, anyway

SolidIdea: Altered the jaw a bit. Shield stayed the same, but I think it's just a stylistic thing. If it's something a lot of people are seeing, I might change it (and I might anyway, as I've noticed it more and more now that you've brought it up), but not for now.

Thanks for all the crits, guys. There's been a ton of useful info here and I think I'm learning something. Either way, I'm outside my normal style a bit, which is always good. Keep it coming!