Captain America...and DP, I guess **Updated 07/21/06**

[Tremulant]

Updated. I tried out the variable what's-it stuff at Helm's beckoning, and I'm glad for it. It was... more of an exercise than I expected. Did it turn out okay? That's up to you.

1 million points to miascugh for the mind blowingly realistic and anatomically accurate edit.

...Sad thing is it's still more plausible than that Lefeild abomination...

[Feron]

I think the newest edit looks great - but he looks a bit weedy.  I think helms - edit was awesome, but then again its helm.  Perhaps bulk up his upper body a bit exagerated to keep the comic book feel.  I don't know why you scrapped the original deadpool - it looked good apart from some anatomy.  Maybe take it back to the lineart stage and rework it from there.

[lief]

knee caps are too bubbly.  move the mouth to the right a couple of pixels, it'll make the jaw jut more.

[Tremulant]

Thanks for the quick replies, gentlemen.

Feron: He is a bit scrawnier, but then, Cap isn't exactly huge. I'd say middle weight, far as super heroes go. Is he too weedy for that? As for deadpool, well, I did it out of boredom at work, and didn't give it much love. Then I got bored of it, and it got left on the cutting room floor, as it were :p. You're welcome to play around with it, if you'd like. Maybe you can give it the love I couldn't

Lief: Done.

[Feron]

You saying that is middle wait.  No way.  Atm yours is more like Captain Ethiopia than Captain America.  C'mon just give him a bit more muscle power.

[Tremulant]

Heh, yeah, by that interpretation I guess mine is a bit underweight, but in that pic he's also a crime against nature. Run a quick image search on him, and you'll see what I mean.

[AdamAtomic]

hey tremulant beautiful edits, the newest one looks really great.  I would push his pose a little bit, maybe bring his chest and arms forward one pixel; right now it looks slightly like he's leaning back, which reduces him a little i think.  You might also decrease the contrast a little in the ah crotch-ular area, the shading between his pelvis and thighs seems really extreme especially given the lighting on the rest of him.  awesome progress, i love projects like this they are so educational!

[Tremulant]

Adam: Bam. Done.

I'm trying to kill about... 2 more hours, so any suggestions made w/in that timeframe'll be implemented pretty promptly.

[Feron]

You can almost smell the testosterone coming of him.  Yours would look quite nice in a dress.  Lol, not being mean - but everyone prefers a real butch man in a tight lycra outfit.

EDIT: on further inspection yours doesnt seem that far off the picture i posted shape wise - but i think he looks weedy because you havent used many highlights.  If you add more on the prominant bits suchas pecs and shoulders - then they will seem more robust and fuller.

[lief]

quick edit. reduced dithering and adjusted lighting.  small changes to most parts - avoided his left arm, that shit is funky.  You need to amputate at the elbow and redraw.