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Zero Fruit
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[WIP] Ships for an Exploration/Space Sim
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December 20, 2012, 02:01:05 am
Hello everyone. I draw spaceships.
I'm actually working on a project written in Java. It's rather ambitious and I can never find enough motivation to continue working on it, but I've got my course of action for the next few parts planned out, specifically a modular loadout system so I can begin arming these things as soon as possible.
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Pizza Tom
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Re: [WIP] Ships for an Exploration/Space Sim
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December 20, 2012, 05:59:31 am
These seem rather
greebled.
I don't really get a sense of these ships' forms, you may want to focus more on getting the depth to read with shading before you add all the glowy bits. Relevant:
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=14429
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PypeBros
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Re: [WIP] Ships for an Exploration/Space Sim
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December 20, 2012, 10:20:32 am
Quote from: Regulus Awesome on December 20, 2012, 05:59:31 am
These seem rather
greebled.
But that might be expected by many SciFi fans, so I don't see it as a problem in general.
You may have pushed it too far on the Frigate ship, though, where the sense of volume gots lost. The 2 smaller ships have well-defined slanted/rounded edges that help identifying the direction it's travelling to. Frigate loses that volume and there is no clear message received from these additional colours, either.
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Zero Fruit
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Re: [WIP] Ships for an Exploration/Space Sim
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December 20, 2012, 07:30:47 pm
I've redone the frontal side pods on the third ship taking all this into account, is it any improvement in terms of depth?
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Red_Mist
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Not enough pixels in the world.
Re: [WIP] Ships for an Exploration/Space Sim
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December 20, 2012, 08:53:06 pm
greeble! I learn things on pixelation! whoo hoo!
Reg, I would definitely love to see a ship with full depth and then greebled like these. Over-all I like the amount of detail put into these ships, good work so far.
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