Need of help

[Vell123]

Hi, I've been working hard on this character for quite some time now. He has definitely transformed a lot. I would like to know if anyone see any problems with this picture or have any suggestions as to how i can improve this character if any. Thank you

The first image is where I started



The second from the left is the first character I made. Then i ended up with the one furthest to the right.

Next is what I've narrowed it down to as far as how I would like for him to look inside games and what not.




and the final revision is the following image. This is the one I want the most critic on however feel free to suggest anything toward the others as well. Thanks




p.s. please dont steal

[Tourist]

Here is what I see:

Eye line is horizontal.
Shoulders are horizontal.
Waist and hands are horizontal.
Feet are .... ?

The lighting on the arms and hands does not match the light direction.

The general thrust of the the belly/hips doesn't quite match the line of buttons on the shirt.  Something needs to change here.  I recommend going with a wider shoulders and ribcage, and a narrower belly, or else an exaggerated round belly, whichever fits the character design more.

The middle blue color on the shirt is invisible.

Going from darker legs to lighter upper body to high contrast (blue/orange) on the head is a good design.  Good choice on that.

Tourist

[Crow]

I've merged all your different threads on this character into your first one. Please stick to one thread for one piece.

[Vell123]

Most recent update.
@ Crow, wont do it again.



edited

updated 9/6/12