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Offline Zizka

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Cliffside Chipset

on: August 30, 2012, 09:51:45 pm
As usual, I'm looking for critcism, thank you.

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Re: Cliffside Chipset

Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 01:14:34 am
Doesn't look too bad.

Why do you outline the bottom of the cliffs against the water?
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Re: Cliffside Chipset

Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 02:25:17 am
The cliffs look extremely straight, some horizontal(or perhaps more diagonal) cracks and variations would be nice to see!
I like the colors, but the cliffs right now look more like bluish tree trunks.
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