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boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

on: June 16, 2006, 09:35:10 pm
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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #1 on: June 16, 2006, 09:55:12 pm
finish the mammoth

shes gorgeouse
or else i might just hafta.

the boxers pose is alittle boring, maby make it alittle more dynamic. maby bend his head/drop chin into chest, bring gloves up closer to face, put on tips of toes

but the mammoth..
:)

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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #2 on: June 16, 2006, 11:30:27 pm


update, thanks flaber for the comments
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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #3 on: June 17, 2006, 03:15:30 am
the shorts and leg look unfinished, so i wont comment on them, but the glove covering his chest looks a bit flat and has less yellow than the other glove does which makes the shadeing not match. I think it's looking good though.
Perhaps maybe add one more color like a red which blends nicely with the other colors so you can use it on the gear to make them seperate a bit from the skin.

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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #4 on: June 17, 2006, 06:39:51 am
Can't say more then:
Awesome as always Zach.

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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #5 on: June 17, 2006, 03:09:29 pm
the shorts and leg look unfinished, so i wont comment on them, but the glove covering his chest looks a bit flat and has less yellow than the other glove does which makes the shadeing not match. I think it's looking good though.
Perhaps maybe add one more color like a red which blends nicely with the other colors so you can use it on the gear to make them seperate a bit from the skin.

yah, i was thinking about that too, i like his right glove a lot, but i'm having trouble getting the left too look the same.. i'll get it though

i tried putting a red in there, but it wasn't working out, i'll try again though, because it is a smart move, thanks :)


edit:  i think i'm finished ;) 


any other comments?
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Re: boxyboon and the magnifical elephant

Reply #6 on: June 17, 2006, 09:15:03 pm
Nicely done, the only thing I see wrong is his right calf looks a little too fat in the back.