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Some of my random cräîp

on: June 10, 2006, 07:31:57 am
A large sprite I decided to give up on...too mundane.  That's because I didn't know what to do with it, though. : P


An outhouse whose door I had trouble with...so now it's a face.


A young warrior dude...half assed.


Uh...my anatomy skills are really bad.


A statue which was supposed to be a man with a straight jacket.


Rosenbury Do-man...unfinished.


C&C would be nice if no one minds helping me.
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Re: Some of my random cräîp

Reply #1 on: June 10, 2006, 08:02:04 am
The large sprite looks like it would be nice if you finished it as well, I like how it started.

that straight jacket statue could be awesome with some more defenition to it. I'm liking it right now but it seems very unfinished.

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Re: Some of my random cräîp

Reply #2 on: June 10, 2006, 02:46:27 pm
Awesome stuff!
your shading is fine and the colors are quite good.
i'm intrested in more of ur stuff  :)

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Re: Some of my random cräîp

Reply #3 on: June 10, 2006, 04:00:12 pm
I like your cräîp.I prefer the more rendered, detailed stuff, like the house (LOAF THA HOUSE), than the more cartoony chef (but it's nice as well).

Critiques? Generally, everything looks unfinished, i recommend you concern yourself with that. Specifically, the roof tiles on the house should follow the shapes of the roof, the statue man's colors are too foggy (more contrast between them), the bigger guy with the cape is a bit hard to read, and the AA on the Chef isn't enough, you can still see the jaggies.

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Re: Some of my random cräîp

Reply #4 on: June 10, 2006, 09:48:54 pm
Thanks, and yes, I barely ever finish the works I start.  I'm going to take your crits, though, and hopefully I'll get some of these done.