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[WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

on: April 27, 2012, 10:04:11 pm

Hello everybody.

I've been working on this in my spare time the last week. Don't really have a plan for it other than experimenting with 4-color pixelling and readability. It would be great to get some general feedback on it before I go on. Especially the dithering and "noise" texture. Not sure if I like those bits but I need some kind of transition from light to dark. Ideas?



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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 02:59:04 pm
The color is okay but the color of man mixing with the color of surround. Other wise all things  is best!!! :y:
Maybe giving the man a shadow would help ...

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #2 on: May 06, 2012, 05:05:47 pm
Let's add details!
details will give you light/shadow sources,and help dithering work.

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #3 on: May 06, 2012, 09:58:06 pm
Holy...

That is an incredible edit!! So much to learn from this! I'll be back with a new version after I wrap my head around all the things you did.

Thanks a lot man :D

Ooohh..

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #4 on: May 07, 2012, 01:12:03 pm
Holy!..
that is some example!
I'm impressed by the smoking animation for sure; but the edit, which is just an example from Ramenshop, is insane.

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #5 on: May 07, 2012, 02:06:53 pm
Amazing edit. It's been about 40min since I first saw it, and still coming to terms with the impact.

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #6 on: May 08, 2012, 01:22:56 am
Amazing edit. It's been about 40min since I first saw it, and still coming to terms with the impact.

You know you've submitted a good edit when you traumatize the users.

You've submitted a good edit!




. . . ok, ErekT, let's see it!
« Last Edit: May 08, 2012, 01:25:16 am by Mathias »

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #7 on: May 08, 2012, 07:58:50 am
@ smoking animation:
just one drawback: the smoker would not be able to expell smoke that far. At half the distance, its "natural" move up will be the major movement and the move forward will have almost come to a stop. (it's decelerating horizontally and accelerating vertically).

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #8 on: May 11, 2012, 05:33:03 pm
Yes..

A little wip update. It's hard for me to avoid leaning heavily on the edit in places, but I feel I've managed to internalize quite a bit.

Thanks so much RAMENSHOP for the excellent edit! You're a hero :D

@PypeBros: Thanks, will fix ;)


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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #9 on: May 21, 2012, 09:45:17 am
Let's add details!
details will give you light/shadow sources,and help dithering work.



Whoa... that's FANTASTIC!

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #10 on: May 21, 2012, 01:39:45 pm
It's still amazing to look at, I'm compelled to commend RAMENSHOP's on his utterly awesome edit :y:

and that's quite a considerable improvement ErekT

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #11 on: May 22, 2012, 07:35:20 am
Let's add details!
details will give you light/shadow sources,and help dithering work.


Really big fan of this edit!  :crazy:

Original is coming along nicely too I really like the silhouettes in the windows :-)

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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #12 on: May 26, 2012, 02:37:16 pm
Thanks :) Yeh, RAMENSHOP's version is super. I've learned a lot from it, especially those glow effects.

Another update, still wip. I tried a color version too.





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Re: [WIP] Street scene with dude smoking..

Reply #13 on: May 27, 2012, 02:47:38 pm




Must say I find that quite an interesting color scheme.  Sets a nice tone.
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