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Offline Mush

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Horned

on: April 10, 2012, 01:25:48 am
Just looking for some crits before I clean and color.

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Re: Horned

Reply #1 on: April 10, 2012, 05:41:33 am
The head appears a little off to me. Misaligned towards the left side of the body to my eyes.

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Re: Horned

Reply #2 on: April 10, 2012, 10:09:28 am
Colors have inherent luminance values.
Because of this I find it much easier to construct lighting in grayscale:


He's a bit low to mid key.
Some higher values could help.

I like his overall shape.
The drawing could stand a lot more exaggeration, but that's more of a stylistic choice depending on what you want.
« Last Edit: April 10, 2012, 10:32:29 am by PixelPiledriver »
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Re: Horned

Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 11:30:58 am
I think this looks really good.
Two things I don't like:
-His right fist appears to be way bigger than the left one.
-Also his right foot stand doesn't match with his leg and knee pose. His leg looks like his foot should aim outward.

Feel free to disagree, I'm not an artist. :)