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Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

on: October 20, 2011, 10:35:03 pm
howdy all. would be obliged if you could share some critique on this piece before i get bored with it. top left is most recent, the others are just context of what it's been through. any suggestions & ideas welcome. thank ye.

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Re: critique plz

Reply #1 on: October 20, 2011, 10:40:15 pm
desaturated tire tread and some flashy rims  :y:

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Re: critique plz

Reply #2 on: October 21, 2011, 03:22:26 am
wider car?

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Re: critique plz

Reply #3 on: October 21, 2011, 01:09:55 pm


hmmm. i think i prefered it when it was simpler. might tone it down, take it a few steps back... anyways thanks dudes.

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Re: critique plz

Reply #4 on: October 21, 2011, 04:34:27 pm

a slightly new direction.


i'm liking were this is going.

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Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #5 on: October 23, 2011, 10:21:13 pm
what kinda shading should i go for? i think the simpler kind looks better. ya gotta gimme feedback peeps.



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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #6 on: October 24, 2011, 03:20:26 am
Right would be more successful if they were all shaded as delicately as main guy, and had dark brown interior lines. Also bump up car contrast to match them, they don't fit their scenery.

Elongate the upper arm on the driver. Coming along nicely although I much preferred it when it was 1 blue guy or 1 naked man on car.

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #7 on: October 24, 2011, 03:12:11 pm
Machete man needs balls.
There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #8 on: October 24, 2011, 03:36:23 pm
He has a machete, he doesn't need balls

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Re: Cholo Gangstas (Nudity)

Reply #9 on: October 24, 2011, 05:38:21 pm


I much preferred it when it was 1 blue guy or 1 naked man on car.
How come? I thought it looked real boring. Anyways thanks for the feedback. :y:

Ptoing: Added a ball bag just for you dude.

Also reduced the size of his D, as it was resting on the driver's shoulder.

Need some help with the position/pose of the guy in the back tho. I tried taking him out but it kinda throws it off. Ideas?

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pretty much done with the guys i think. gotta fix the car now.
« Last Edit: October 24, 2011, 07:53:47 pm by 8bitty »