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Offline Phlakes

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Re: Roman Man

Reply #10 on: June 11, 2011, 07:28:15 pm
Those clouds are great. I'd say they're really lacking in contrast, but it works.

As for the mountains, right now they look... fuzzy. Like they're covered in wool.
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Re: Roman Man

Reply #11 on: June 12, 2011, 12:46:54 pm
Lol@the dodo, very cool.
Background looks nice for a start but the form of the mountains is like a bunch of pyramids or cone-shapes which also gets repeated into the clouds.
Maybe go for some longer ridges with less sharp spikes especially in the back row.
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