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Offline lilwing

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[wip] 16 color portrait C+C

on: June 05, 2011, 12:31:04 pm
This is my first portrait ever. Spent about an hour on it. What do you think?

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Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C

Reply #1 on: June 05, 2011, 09:02:20 pm
Canvas size makes it feel cramped. Give it more room.


Only dither skin if you have very closely related shaded. Here, you don't.

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Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C

Reply #2 on: June 10, 2011, 12:25:32 am
Yeah lose the dithering.
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Re: [wip] 16 color portrait C+C

Reply #3 on: June 10, 2011, 03:14:26 am
The shadows for the eyes could be darker. Is the character a guy with long hair? The broken line on the left (his right side) breaks the flow of the hair. I think the face is drawn well. How many colours are used?
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