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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #10 on: May 18, 2011, 12:53:54 pm
Thanks a lot for the edit, xeokk! Your version has a much better sense of depth, and I really like the changes you made to the face.
Here's in update, taking some of your suggestions into account:

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #11 on: May 18, 2011, 05:41:14 pm
oh wow, i love the new colors, and the face is really great. i like it  ;D

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #12 on: May 18, 2011, 06:35:20 pm
Thanks, dude! :)

Here's an updated idle animation:


I know she's ridiculously hyper but I like it that way, hehe...

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #13 on: May 19, 2011, 03:55:28 am
Ponytail!



I think I like the silhouette better without the scarf trail. Thoughts?

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #14 on: May 19, 2011, 05:32:30 am
Looks very good! Not too bouncy imo.

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I think I like the silhouette better without the scarf trail.

Agreed.
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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #15 on: May 19, 2011, 12:35:08 pm
Thanks, Mush! :)

Running WIP:
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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #16 on: May 19, 2011, 12:44:36 pm
Running WIP:

I haven't a running ninja reference to oppose, but right now, the silouhetto suggests more Shantae's trousers to me  than anything japanese.

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #17 on: May 19, 2011, 01:07:38 pm
The pants are meant to be like the girl's in this picture:


The boots just aren't quite as high. I tried making the boots knee-high when I was working on the idle pose, but it didn't read as well.
Also, the running WIP doesn't take the "skirt" part of the outfit into account, which will change the final silhouette significantly.

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #18 on: May 19, 2011, 01:15:56 pm
I think he was criticizing the style of run, rather than the clothing itself.

This is the most immediate reference for a ninja run: http://tsgk.captainn.net/?p=showgame&t=sy&sy=6&ga=188

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Re: [WIP] Little Ninja

Reply #19 on: May 20, 2011, 07:11:33 am
I appreciate the feedback, but I think I'll keep this fluid style of running as opposed to a more traditional, sharp ninja-style. Establishing a consistent character is more important to me than ninja authenticity, and I think the idle animation shows the character isn't very disciplined, physically. :P

Here's an update: