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Offline Demian

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[WIP] Mecha

on: March 04, 2011, 02:01:34 am
Hello, i made these for an iPhone game im starting to develop. Before going any further i want to improve them as much as possible so, C&C welcome!

Standing reference: http://lh6.ggpht.com/_K5IIY6T5-v0/R2H4XhQGtvI/AAAAAAAAKF0/20jYolfierA/Mecha___Siren_II_by_Eriance.jpg

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Re: [WIP] Mecha

Reply #1 on: March 04, 2011, 11:35:38 pm
All I can say is that these are so good, they're beyond my ability to critique.

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Re: [WIP] Mecha

Reply #2 on: March 05, 2011, 12:38:37 am
The fleshy colors make it appear more organic than robotic. Higher contrast will accentuate the hard edges of the armor. The codpiece in the aiming sprite (right one) looks like its at a weird angle (copy pasted from the left sprite). The robot's left upper leg looks very short in both sprites. The pointy feet don't make much sense to me, especially if it's standing on the ground. You could give it more depth by making the far limbs darker.

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Re: [WIP] Mecha

Reply #3 on: March 05, 2011, 12:49:29 am
Hey thanks a lot for the comments guys!

@big brother: all your critics are so true, i will work on them asap! ::)
But i forgot to mention that it is supposed to be floating in the outer space and that's the why behind it's feets.
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