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Offline AmuroC

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[WIP] Cloud's Sword

on: March 05, 2011, 01:48:55 am

It seems like somethings "off" kind of. Also, can someone show me how I would put shine on the bigger part of the blade.

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Re: [WIP] Cloud's Sword

Reply #1 on: March 05, 2011, 03:06:18 am
It's really plain..
add some color ramping to break the monotony.
it's suffering from A LOT of banding, so get rid of that asap.
take away the black outline, and add some aa. if I remember correctly, Cloud's sword is much bigger than this, maybe make it a little bit longer?
those circles in the middle make it look really flat. add some depth by adding shadows and highlights.
Your lighting seems inconsistent, choose a light source and work with it.

You're on the right track, it looks really good, but it's just a little too boring. keep up the good work  :y: