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Offline Rybar

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[WIP] iphone game art

on: February 27, 2011, 03:12:35 am
working on art for an iphone game.  It's a vertical climber-type, sorta like doodle-jump.  Would like some feedback on my work so far.




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Re: [WIP] iphone game art

Reply #1 on: March 04, 2011, 05:18:28 am
These are looking pretty good, the pallette and overall tone of the background looks great, but the (thorns?) seem out of place. I can see you're trying to make those tiles contrast, but the red doesn't really suit the style of the background; the entire tile doesn't, at that. The tiles also use ditherithing, whereas the background does not, and I expect them to be more wavy and loose like the background is. So... yeah, the tiles just don't suit the background :3

I noticed the top right tree/vine in the background doesn't have vines joining the flowers like the others do. I assume this is a mistake, no?

Also, will the background layers use parallax scrolling? That would look splendid :)

It looks good! The background elements are really nice, I especially love the branch :3

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