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Offline thanslo

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first pixelanimation

on: January 23, 2011, 07:02:20 pm
hello,
this is our first animation. we would appreciate constructive criticism.




cheers,
the two from thanslo

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Re: first pixelanimation

Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 07:04:54 pm
ahahah this made me laugh  :D

the main thing i notice is that parts of the body move but the body as a whole stays still i think that alittle body movmentmight do wonders(in my opinion ;))
In my opinion ;D

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Re: first pixelanimation

Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 01:49:34 pm
hello,
this is our first animation. we would appreciate constructive criticism.




cheers,
the two from thanslo

Lol looks funny as.
Yeah the body should move too and if its running then maybe its wings could flap too.
It could be being chased by a dog or something if you're feeling adventurous...