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Re: MKScorpion

Reply #10 on: April 13, 2006, 11:06:23 pm
Hey hey hey!  My man Teej decided to join the party!  I'm glad your posting here.

There are a few pieces that get posted here at pixelopolis that everybody just LOVES to edit.  Yours, my friend, is one of them.  You have a very solid base here with a good sense of lighting.  I also like the hue shift on the skin towards blue.  Listen very closely to Ptoing about the colours - He is the grand master god of colours and his advice will be very useful.  Also make sure you clean up those lines to make them all nice and smooth.  It will increase the quality tremendousely
« Last Edit: April 16, 2006, 05:54:23 am by Indigo »

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Re: MKScorpion

Reply #11 on: April 14, 2006, 12:27:33 am
It's also got some pillow shading on the yellow parts.

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Re: MKScorpion

Reply #12 on: April 16, 2006, 05:58:47 am
I forgot to post my anatomy crits...

1) the overall thing seems to be offbalanced to our left
2) His knees seem a bit large to me
3) His feet are a bit large and cartoony... kinda like mickey mouse-ish
4) the leg anatomy is all messed up - He is missing a very important muscle in the leg.  In your quads you only drew two muscles.  Your missing the one that gets sandwiched in-between those two muscles;  the rectus femoris

here is a good diagram for you:
http://orgs.jmu.edu/strength/images/male_muscle_anatomy_upper_leg.gif

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Re: MKScorpion

Reply #13 on: April 19, 2006, 11:00:02 am
pwnt with 9 cullas.



actually all i did as greyscale it.
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