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Offline Alastor

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Character template

on: December 16, 2010, 04:01:38 am
This is a male character template, i just wanted some comments and critique.
Thanks guys.

edit:
forgot the image..

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Re: Character template

Reply #1 on: December 16, 2010, 04:27:47 am
I tried to edit this and none of it makes sense, the shading style of the head is 10x different from the shading style of the body. here is my slight changes, but I would say restart the shading. Though other more experienced pixel artist maybe able to help you with this

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Re: Character template

Reply #2 on: December 16, 2010, 06:11:17 am

Eh I was bored so I edited it..
Anyway, it's best way for you to see what to improve, if I improved anything..
I couldn't do the legs right.
You used way too much not needed colors I think..

PS. Now you guys know what I look like nude  :-[, I'm a bit more muscular with proper abs though..  :-[ jkjk  :lol:

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Re: Character template

Reply #3 on: December 16, 2010, 06:32:55 am
I tried to edit this and none of it makes sense, the shading style of the head is 10x different from the shading style of the body. here is my slight changes, but I would say restart the shading. Though other more experienced pixel artist maybe able to help you with this




that's exactly what we needed!
thanks!

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Re: Character template

Reply #4 on: December 16, 2010, 07:57:25 am
i'd go for a more squared jaw. looks like a mantis creature with the jaw as it is.
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