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Goomba-nimation

on: November 30, 2010, 03:31:43 pm
Here's a Goomba from the Super Mario series.

Please tell me if something is wrong  :)

I'll shade it later, i prefer end the animation cycle first.

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #1 on: November 30, 2010, 10:07:52 pm
I like it :D, and you did the animation pretty well too.

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #2 on: December 01, 2010, 01:06:31 am
My only complaint is to shade it. Looks awesome either way though.

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #3 on: December 01, 2010, 01:39:43 am
I would suggest having it's head move a bit more.

To and fro from the viewer or something.

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #4 on: December 01, 2010, 01:23:46 pm
More like this ?

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #5 on: December 01, 2010, 02:49:26 pm
More like this ?

the fangs move more than the head itself ... that's a bit odd.
It might use some twist, too (possibly need to be sub-pixel for that)
The last point would be that the distant foot remains parallel to the ground during the cycle while the closer foot is angled during the lifting.

Otherwise, it's quite nice.

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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #6 on: December 01, 2010, 05:45:35 pm
It could do with some left/right swing, keeping the eyes focussed ahead. Looks like an angled shuffle forwards than a complete walk cycle, as the closer foot never goes as far ahead as the further back one, and neither goes behind his main mass, needed to push him forward in walking. The feet not going as far forward as eachother would be right if he were angled so he was getting closer to the screen as he walked but the rest of the image is side on. Looking better with your last improvements too but my mentioned ideas could tidy it before you launch into the shading
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Re: Goomba-nimation

Reply #7 on: December 02, 2010, 07:44:26 pm
The back foot looks a little small, I know it's further away but it doesn't seem like the distance would be that much. Also it seems like the closer foot changes a bit as it moves which looks cool but the back foot stays static as it moves. Overall it looks awesome though.