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Offline LarryPixel

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To:Carl Sagan

on: November 12, 2010, 05:17:42 pm
Looking for a bit of constructive criticism on a couple pieces from earlier in the year.



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Re: To:Carl Sagan

Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 03:33:59 pm
There seems to be some unintentional artifacts on these.  Notice around the sun, the bushes, and the side of the shuttle.  These artifacts make the piece feel messy.
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Re: To:Carl Sagan

Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 06:07:25 pm
I see what you mean.  They were actually intentional, and intended to add a sort of...glow...to the objects in question.  Any suggestions to make that come across in the piece, maybe if the artifacts were a bit brighter?

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Re: To:Carl Sagan

Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 08:20:48 pm
Any suggestions to make that come across in the piece, maybe if the artifacts were a bit brighter?

Use only one, maybe two, colors for the glow effect so the viewer knows that the palette is still controlled and the effect is intentional. I would say take one of the lightest tints that's already there and use that.

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Re: To:Carl Sagan

Reply #4 on: November 20, 2010, 02:42:45 pm
I love your moon base.  ;D But it's veerry blurry.

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