much better pose. head is still very small and the face needs lots of work. don't worry about details like nostrils at this size, you're thinking too symbolically, just try to get the forms of the face down. chin needs to be more pronounces rather than sloping inward (it's a defining feature of modern humans), lips are too straight, nose runs straight down the face rather than projecting outward. the way the hair interacts with the scalp doesn't make much sense to me either. she seems to be missing her right trap, just goes from shoulder right to neck. not really fond of the pose you've got her right hand in, dunno what that's trying to convey. i'd maybe move her left breast a pixel or two closer toward the center of her torso, as the torso looks too straight-on compared to the rest of the image. her right shin should be straight, not bow out.
