Fellow pixel artists! c: (NARUTO)

[NarutoOrigins]

NEW WORK HAS BE CREATED SCROLL DOWN A FEW POSTS LAZY PANTS!




Me and my programmer friend lately decide to make a game, based on the popular anime "Naruto"
Lol i know you probably heard this a thousand times, mainly from byonders.
I myself happen to be small proportion of the...good byonders?
This is a non profit project, consider the fact its the game inst based on our ideas.

Logo:


Game DUMP:


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Just any tips on trying to capture the correct naruto style would be nice, to be honest any crit would be nice.
I atleast hope some one reads, comments on this topic=3

Thanks in advance!

[coffee]

oioi!

I really enjoy looking at this, your choice of colours is nice. I think u've catched the style on the eyes and the building. Can't really say anything else as u've not yet added any recognisable characters.
Only flaws I can find atm is at the scalp of the small character "base". few strange pixels that u might wanna remove and clean up.

Keep up the work and keep posting updates!

[Drakojin]

Hey, another BYOND user!

I like the setup you have for the bars a lot, aswell as the eyes. One thing I noticed is that the shoulder on the east state looks like it's shrugged up, while the north and south states have the shoulders relaxed. Also, in the logo the red bubbles are a bit much.

Good luck on your game.

P.S: I just looked on the game's hub and saw you are hiring pixel artists. I would like to help if a spot is still open. Reformist-@hotmail.com if you have any questions.

[Elk]

Will be interesting to see you progress ...

Nice graphics so far...but a tad too many gradients used... expecially in the GUI, where 2d should be in the foreground to differenciate between motion and fixed foreground stuff (sigh, i hope you get what I mean)

[NarutoOrigins]

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wut wut in the butt?

Lol, thanks for all the criticism, is this any better? yes i realize that i referenced the ears of the mugshot off someone else work, im working on making them look more..original..=/

Improved the palette for just about everything, added the animations for the base..although i cant seem to do the south stance..my failed attempts hunt me..:c

No that is not pain, the game will consist of an large amount of customization i just threw some things together to create a typical player.

I am not turning this into a classifieds ad, but any help on the game would be a appreciated :3

[NarutoOrigins]

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