[WIP] Black Rock Shooter

[Gatts]

I used to pixel only ragnarok style sprites, but now i want to try different things.
I think torso and head became pretty ugly. How can i make it better ?

[FRAWG]

It needs some serious anatomy work and some contrast in colors. If you want some references with anatomy, there's a topic in general discussion about it.

[Demon11777]

A few things ,
First off there is alot of pillow shading going on. Choose a light define light source before shading so that you can define the object. 
Based on the shade of her jacket you should be able to see some of it behind her, It looks as if it was just sleeves.
And im not really sure whats going on with her hair , it just looks awkward. Might i suggest --> http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQFRFFx_wrC4zG2nHtNW1WaDwmVlUsls-xrdnmv2yYDi8DtXnU&t=1&usg=__ZEFxpDUTcWVkNii610WTLU9XSuE=

[jazcks]

need more tits 

[Gatts]

Thanks for the critics. I read the anatomy tread in general discussion, i think i'm gonna try the "Anatomy Guild pratic regimen" rs

The character has little boobs and this weird hair, however i just can't sprite it perfectly.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/060/e/5/BLACK_ROCK_SHOOTER_7_by_ryoheihuke.jpg