Sessy Lady...

[God Slayer]

Not all women wear double Ds, alright? I think it looks fine, feminine in a way, but tomboyish as well- in my opinion, you've done what you set out to do with this one.

[Conzeit]

it's not really about how girly or tomboy she looks, as much as it's about how undefined the shape is, I cant even tell her head apart from her chest in real size.

[The B.O.B.]

it's not really about how girly or tomboy she looks, as much as it's about how undefined the shape is, I cant even tell her head apart from her chest in real size.

Are you still talking about the one on the right, or the newly edited version on the left? I thought her head looked a bit more clearly defined from the right version. Am I wrong? Care to elaborate on what you meant, cause I'm still a little unclear on what you are referring to.

[Dhaos]

hmm... being that you are using shadows so heavily, you might consider:
A)dimming the stomach area
B)dim the < leg (like the left edits)
C)add more darker shading to the breasts, to give them more depth. Also < foot seems rather messy, clearer AAing might help.
D)shortening her legs, they're rather long compared to the body...very long

I do, however, think the pic is quite good. The outfit is neat and so is the pose.