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Offline Magides

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[WIP] Second Attempt

on: August 08, 2010, 08:11:44 am
Keeping with the vegetable theme, here's another try, but with Asparagus.





I had a hard time shading / coloring the stalk, but found this to be acceptable.

Constructive feedback is appreciated.
In case you're wondering, here is my reference photo.
http://theora.com/images/asparagus.jpg

Thanks!


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Offline Demon11777

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Re: [WIP] Second Attempt

Reply #1 on: August 11, 2010, 07:32:57 pm
Looks delicious!   I made a tinyy edit though.  I didn't like the light colors on the top. I darkened those a bit and I thought that having those lime green areas were a bit hard to read so I put a darker outline around it.  I hope it helps , I am nowhere near a great spriter but i hope that i was helpful.

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Re: [WIP] Second Attempt

Reply #2 on: August 13, 2010, 08:13:59 pm
Nice, I think  that's a great idea.

I appreciate the help! ;D