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Minotaur [Wip]

on: August 12, 2010, 05:20:09 am
 :) I Call him Charlie

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #1 on: August 12, 2010, 06:18:13 am
Hmm, where to begin.

Let's go from top to bottom

Anatomy/Basics.
Horns- They look out of shape, almost like they are more of a cloud rather then solid horns, try to make them more slender and look like solid curved bones.
Head- The angle looks word with the rest of his body, like he's standing with the front to us, but the head at a 90% degree, which, trust me, looks weird and hurts like hell. :P might be an idea to fix with turning the torso more towards the side.
Left arm - Too short, need the elbow to be more visible.
Right arm - He has no elbow on it.
Chest - As said before, turn it to the side more or turn the head more towards us.
Left leg - It looks werid with the anchor depth there , an idea is to make the kneecap more higher due to double kneecapped legs.
Right leg: Looks okay, just the hoof look odd with how the feet/Leg angle is.

Let's begin there. :)

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #2 on: August 12, 2010, 08:01:39 am
 :lol:  Alrightt  mucho thanks VDX!  Ill get to work on those anatomy problems. repost in a day or 2. row row fight the powah!
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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #3 on: August 13, 2010, 09:11:31 am
Okay, Got a new version of the guy up.

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #4 on: August 13, 2010, 06:17:06 pm
A quick edit:



I like this guy, he's kind of fun.  Unfortunately, you've got kind of a "HERE ARE HIS MUSCLES" approach.  Relax, let the muscles kind of flow in to each other.

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #5 on: August 13, 2010, 10:19:33 pm
Ahh I see whatcha mean. I think this looks better :]  ?         

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #6 on: August 14, 2010, 10:07:12 pm


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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 03:06:00 am
It's that..."anchor" thing on his left leg still bothers me, rest really looks good.

Tried to "change" the leg, but I'm not happy with it either like this.

>.< The muscle bending on his right leg is what you should try and turn with your mind to make out how it looks in 3D and then try to follow those shadows.

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Re: Minotaur [Wip]

Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 05:55:59 am
Really quickly, right now his hands aren't the same size. Also I'd work on giving more definition to his right knuckles as they kind of make a spherical shape.