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Re: [wip] a few characters

Reply #10 on: July 16, 2010, 08:57:29 pm

he's shirtless now thanks to vic
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Re: [wip] a few characters

Reply #11 on: July 17, 2010, 01:43:35 am
sorry for the double post but i think i've cleaned up enough to do so

also i forgot to comment on this:
the character still seems an anomaly to me, since beards usually signify "i don't give a fuck" and a more natural, honest vibe whereas the character looks like a hipster (are those shudda shades?) who really cares about how he comes off. but maybe this is intentional, and maybe i'm just misinterpreting the character.
the character's beard is actually a sort of "ironic" beard
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ironic in the way only a hipster can pull off. (which is really impossible to explain with only the sprite but oh well!!)


still gotta give him abs and really touch on that whole area
the chest and (his) left arm and leg are /pretty much/ done though

hats really bugging me now that i look at it again, probably gonna have to reshade that

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Re: [wip] a few characters

Reply #12 on: July 17, 2010, 04:53:39 am
I can't tell remotely what's going on in the facial area of the guy to the left, and his legs are considerably smaller than those of the other characters, with less anatomically correct shape. I really like your cartoon style on the left three, but I think that the buff guy on the right's anatomy doesn't fit the style of the other three characters.
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Re: [wip] a few characters

Reply #13 on: July 18, 2010, 04:08:14 am


i'm pretty tired of working on these so sorry for ignoring the last comment, but unless there's any huge problems i'm probably gonna call these done

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Re: [wip] a few characters

Reply #14 on: July 18, 2010, 05:52:25 pm
I like it. I would try to work a bit mole's right hand's perspective and what about the guy with a mohawk? are his pink and blue bullets so important? maybe a little less saturation would do it
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