Okay, here is my personal opinon and critique:
Legs are too spread out.
The legs and pelvis seem detached becasue of the heavy lines between them.
The sprites look puffy, causing them to look like dolls.
The head looks like it's being viewed somewhat from above, while the body looks like it's being viewed directly from the front.
The clothes seem blurry and lack contrast. It might look better if it was sharper and less blurry.
(Sorry if it's harsh at all, but what are critics for?
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