TWGoK Characters

[brod]

Jun Nagase

She's a student teacher and my favorite character who is just plain adorable and kick-ass
Anyway, I'm pretty proud with how she turned out, but I'm still constantly adding and changing things about her. So, I'd like to get her perfectly done, since she deserves as much. 

Some references I used:
< http://sadpanda.us/images/99630-KY7A995.jpg >
< http://media.onemanga.com/mangas/00000901/000187002/02.jpg >
< http://media.onemanga.com/mangas/00000901/000176172/01.jpg >

Nanaka Haibara (LEFT) WIP:

2nd favorite character, she's an expert shogi player (kinda like chess) and she's also pretty bad-ass. In very early WIP, I'm still sketching her base out.

Refs:
< http://sadpanda.us/images/99636-SSGFQ6D.jpg >

So again, crits comments and suggestions would be heavily appreciated. Thanks.

[VDX]

The ponytail seems to always lean onto her chest rather then at the side according to the references.
Also, something about the right leg is bugging me, don't know why.
The left leg however is quite top notch!

And also, TWGOK ftw!

[brod]

WOW *facepalm* how did I not notice that..? Fixing now.. And about the leg, a friend of mine told me that too.. but I don't know what either of you mean.. maybe the shading?

I've started working on another girl from TWGoK, Nanaka Haibara, so c/c/s would be nice for that too.

My WIP:

Her ref: http://sadpanda.us/images/99636-SSGFQ6D.jpg

(the circle is where her hand is going, I'm having a lot of trouble getting that sketched)