C64 attempt

[theguy]

"A lonely head in the desert contemplates life."

Yeah first try at C64, properly atleast. I think it turned out well, there is too much contrast between the yellow and the grey (IMO) but it was the closest shade that wasn't the same brightness. Other than that it's a fantastic pallete to use and this was fun to make. Any critique would be splendid

[McClaneGames]

The nose definitely pops out at you more than anything else.  Below that, though, it looks like he has four lips, though I'm assuming the bottom two are a double chin...  A tad more detail there wouldn't hurt, even if you want him fading out.  Probably on purpose, but your one in the signature is backwards.  But, like I said, that was probably done on purpose.  Overall great piece!

[theguy]

It wasn't intended, I was just very tired, I was wondering why the 1 didn't look right   will edit this post with an edit, thanks



Okay, updated. I've put all the details I can think to put in there, in.