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Offline Wharp

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[WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

on: March 29, 2010, 12:40:33 am
This sprite sheet is 100% custom by me. I need help with the animation, I want to keep it to as little frames as possible. And the crouch is horrible altogether.
the three sets are for animation per frame. Just ignore it.
here are some mockups aswell:
« Last Edit: March 29, 2010, 12:43:06 am by Wharp »

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #1 on: March 29, 2010, 12:46:54 am
In general, make the arms less static. You also may want to reconsider the position of them altogether if he isnt carrying something across them.
In the crouch, I think it would do wonders if you arched his back a bit more, and in the walk cycle, you should consider bending at the knees a bit more.

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #2 on: March 29, 2010, 12:47:04 am
is it supposed to be funny the way his arms are?
don't take that as an insult, i'm just wondering.

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #3 on: March 29, 2010, 12:55:05 am
That's so he can insert the gun sprite.
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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #4 on: March 29, 2010, 01:34:55 am
what about this? I just made it:

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #5 on: March 29, 2010, 01:52:45 am
Its better, but move the spine forwards instead of backwards, now it looks like hes about to fall over, and thats kind of a feat when hes that low to the ground.

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #6 on: March 29, 2010, 02:34:16 am
what do you mean, like move the arms forward and hunch him over a little?

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Re: [WIP] Noob Sprite Sheet

Reply #7 on: March 29, 2010, 08:26:13 am
Kinda. That would work, but you could honestly just lean him slightly forward, right now hes leaning back.