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Offline Bahototh

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side view mockup

on: February 04, 2010, 07:49:12 pm
Trying some ideas...

The background is really challenging for me. Flat 2d is kinda boring, so I'd like a little
more depth. No prizes for where I got the guy's style ...

Thoughts?

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Re: side view mockup

Reply #1 on: February 04, 2010, 11:31:09 pm
the last row of mountains (furthest from us) could get lighter.
i don't know what you have planned for the foreground, but it definitely needs something.
also, about the items, there is a lot of outlines (i'm a hypocrite for saying that :P)
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Re: side view mockup

Reply #2 on: February 05, 2010, 11:58:18 am
Yup, you should decide for a style and stick with that. Add outlines on the man, or removee them from the items (i'd suggest this one  ;) )

Also, items are at a higher resolution and with more details than the player, doesn't look nice. You should fix this too.
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Re: side view mockup

Reply #3 on: February 05, 2010, 12:31:26 pm
Also you could have mentioned that the player sprite is from Flashback, so that no on assumes you made it. Read the RULES
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Re: side view mockup

Reply #4 on: February 06, 2010, 02:18:18 pm
Did a little mockup x2

suggestions what I could do w background?

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