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Roach
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Every Villian Is Lemons
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February 13, 2016, 05:18:34 pm
Needed a break from my animation project I'm working on.
I made a laughing lemon, and an apple doing, idk what it's doing actually, he's just a creepy apple.
I didn't use a reference for any of these, but I hope I'm not terribly off.
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Pusty
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Re: Every Villian Is Lemons
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February 13, 2016, 05:29:59 pm
The lemon looks quite nice
The apples nose looks off also the inner outlines of the apple face aren't really fitting as you didn't use any other outlines on the sprite.
Also the shadow of the face looks like banding to me. The teeth might need some shading as well
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Roach
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Re: Every Villian Is Lemons
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February 13, 2016, 06:02:05 pm
@Pusty Thanks for the feedback.
Hopefully this is better.
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