Game Title Screen Art

[mozzy]

This is the design I have for the backround image of title screen for a game. I feel that the anatomy is way off, I want to get that down before I begin any pixel work/more detail. I forgot to draw her right hand, which she uses to smell a flower.
Old:
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-1.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-2.png

New:

It is based on this poster by a French artist who's name escapes me at the moment  

[Dorian]

According to my vast knowledge of French artists, I can safely say that the poster is by Paul Berthon.
... Okay fine it was in the corner of the image.   

Your piece is excellent so far, everything is perfect. The only problem I have is with the hand. Perhaps allow more space at the bottom to show the full hand? At the moment it is a bit awkward looking at it.

[mozzy]

Improvement?

[EvilEye]

Thats a little better yes. The hair is pretty damn fluffy.

[Mush]

Face edit:

[mozzy]

Thanks!



I don't want her to be too pretty. Just a bit above normal is perfect.

[mozzy]

Major update, shading is yucky:

[Mathias]

Her face is too flat. Compare against your ref.

[mozzy]

What else do you reccomend doing because I'm not seeing much of a difference in the shading.

[krasimir]

I like the color palette, other than that it's not really my type of girl