[WIP] Female Gunslinging Character. (First try at female)

[Pantamime]

This is another character for a game I am working toward. (Original idea was for a comic) Any Critique would be greatly appreciated. I know it is off somehow but i have been looking at it so long that i can't tell quite what is putting me off about it. 

I am sure you guys can point it out for me. Thanks in advanced!!!

[Knight-Pixel]

From what I can tell the torso seems to be a little distorted, her stomach seems to be pointing one way and her upper chest slightly to the left, and it's making the pose look a little odd. The arms too are a little strange pose-wise, what is her right hand doing? Perhaps the left arm fully extended would look more dynamic as she shoots upwards.

I hope that wasn't too harsh, I like where you're going with it