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Offline mattam

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[WiP] Sorter

on: August 03, 2010, 11:02:54 pm
this is Sorter from Richie's Revolver Movie - my first pixelart exercise.



my first take:


i know there is alot of work to be done (all the choppy lines ) but i'm very eager to hear your suggestions for shirt and face/glasses...

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Re: [WiP] Sorter

Reply #1 on: August 06, 2010, 06:11:25 am
You did a great job getting the shapes and form down accurately.
8 colors are not terribly easy to work with, but it looks like you worked them in there well.

I have very little advice to offer except possibly the glasses. I'm a bit biased against 'cross hair' glasses shape, which really don't seem to reflect their form in the photo. I tried out a quick edit mostly shows on the glasses and face:


The trade off is that the glasses look a little less transparent. I ended up trying out two glasses and necks, but that becoming a judgment call.
I also messed around with the hand and jacket a bit, but I'm even less sure about them.

Wish I could help more. Keep up the good work.

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Re: [WiP] Sorter

Reply #2 on: August 06, 2010, 10:11:44 am
I love the glasses and the eyebrow/shade over the left ear is super awsome.

edit: I love all the details you incorporated. thanks for your help