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Offline TOPH3R

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on: May 12, 2009, 11:32:55 pm
 Hey guys, this is my first post here at Pixelation.
I need some c&c on my avatar for a site at create-games.com.



What do you guys think?
I tried to use a minimal amount of colors, about 5 I think?
But I know you guys are the best, and i'm trying to get a little better.  ::)
Yeah... I'm that awesome.

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Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 01:29:17 am
Looks pretty good. I might darker the purple a little bit, right now it blends it with the blue a bit too much.

It looks like you copied the pixels at the bottom of his torso in the wrong order, turning left and then right again as he turns only right. Whatever us going on with the light pixels on his boots seems kind of strange, too. Generally I'd think it would indicate the part of the boot that's closest to the viewer, but then it would only show up on the nearest boot, not one and then the other immediately afterwards.

The arms seem very disproportionately short and thin, too.

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Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 06:32:49 am
i think the previous post showed all the faults. me, i have a minor crit. when he spins he gets face on and delays longer than every other frame. im not sure if it was intentional to show the front view for some reason, but if you just want a definate spin i would remove that delay/extra frame. since im not an expert on animation i dont know which one it is and isnt

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Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 03:02:52 pm
Yeah when I was making it, I accidently put an extra frame in there.
Thanks for the cits guys, I will remember them if I work on this more.
About the feet- Haha, I did just copy them, I diddn't know it was in the wrong order, maybe I am just better off taking the extra time and redrawing them frame by frame next time?
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