Quick portrait revamp

[Darien]

Yeah, that's what I thought, but it doesn't read.  Notice how Mr. Rock's brow forms a connected line, in the portrait it's just one eyebrow up, one down.  I think his right eye should also be open more.

[Jericho]

Yeah, that's what I thought, but it doesn't read.  Notice how Mr. Rock's brow forms a connected line, in the portrait it's just one eyebrow up, one down.  I think his right eye should also be open more.

i dunno...when i make that face its just...one eyebrow up one eyebrow down o_o;.

[Terley]

With a character like this expressions need to exagerated slightly more than what you'd simply see in the mirror as it is a cartoon, otherwise you may as well try duplicate an exact image of yourself.

Edit - apparently im making the same expression in my avatar, lol who knew.

[Dusty]

No, you're making a Popeye expression.

[Indigo]

who knew there could be so many raised eyebrow expressions?? 

[Terley]

No, you're making a Popeye expression.

eh! I am what I am.

[madPXL]

great improvment since the last^^ but a little too dark for me

(I'm making nearly the same expression in my avatar lol)

[Vertigo-zero]

I think the problem with the expression isnt the eyebrows but the eyes... Mr Rock has the eye to our right closed more than the other one...

[Xion]

I think the problem with the expression isnt the eyebrows but the eyes... Mr Rock has the eye to our right closed more than the other one...

This is true. when I raise one eyebrow my other eye sort of closes a bit. Well, I can make it not, but it feels less natural.