hmm...thx,sharprm!!for pointing out that flip thing...as i flip it horizontally...it looks so weird..well..maybe the problem is in my sketch...
i like your edit though^^thx

made some edit..bigger the eyes a little...cos the face is kinda lookingsown...and the neck,i try to make it looks like he`s screamin like yellin..so the head kinda move forward a little...--maybe i failed?--
make the colour of gloves same with the hair..n put highlight...--maybe messy?--
and change the shading..
further help needed..^^
thx!