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David
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Windy
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June 28, 2007, 09:33:55 am
I pretty much did this to throw it in Ptoing's face. Clean up to follow shortly.
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smiker
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Re: Windy
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June 28, 2007, 12:35:45 pm
i think you may antialiase purple with white to givi it a little softness; the hair seems to be in a different layer...
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Faceless
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Re: Windy
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June 28, 2007, 01:10:30 pm
By removing the majority of the swirls in the hair you really lost some of the feel of the piece.
I would AA the boundary of the hair with the face, and I think the old eyebrows were better.
I've never seen the double banded lighting you have on the cheeks on anyone before...
It looks like you have a highlight where there should be a shadow.
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Faktablad
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grow
Re: Windy
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June 28, 2007, 03:56:31 pm
Don't worry about the AA, Faceless, he says he's going to clean it up.
I don't think the "double banded lighting" is bad, but just make it look more like jowls and less like a moustache.
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David
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Re: Windy
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June 30, 2007, 02:25:43 am
A few changes here and there. Still not completely happy with the face.
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Turbo
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less than meets the eye
Re: Windy
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June 30, 2007, 03:27:51 am
I think i prefer the first one's non- neon -ness of the colors. The eyebrows could use some sort of
shading
highlighting, consistent with style. The top hair part looks a bit empty, could use some sort of detail.
Great stuff here, i like your dude
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Last Edit: June 30, 2007, 04:51:33 am by Turbo
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Pixeljoint
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ptoing
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Re: Windy
Reply #6 on:
June 30, 2007, 04:06:02 am
* ptoing casually throws some suggestions back in David's face.
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There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.
miascugh
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Schnitzelfiend
Re: Windy
Reply #7 on:
June 30, 2007, 01:12:03 pm
edit: Actually, my edit is more distracting rather than helpful, just different style choices. Talk to you on msn and I will show it to you if you wish.
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Last Edit: June 30, 2007, 01:31:58 pm by miascugh
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piotrek255
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take it easy -_-
Re: Windy
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June 30, 2007, 03:38:34 pm
ptoing's edit is good, but it kills the pink-face-concept of the original pixelart
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rabidbaboy
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Re: Windy
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July 01, 2007, 09:58:46 am
Actually, the pink/purple neon face thing kinda hurts the eyes.
I like how you did the hair.
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