Just a minor update. I changed the eyes, the weird jaw bump-thing, changed the sky colour. There's still some other stuff that B.O.B. pointed out which I haven't gotten to just yet, but fear not. It will be done.
Setz: Good call. Hopefully the new colour helps.
Aeon: I fixed the jaw thing, as I said, and changed the sky, so hopefully it's doing better now.
Dopple: It's ok, man. I cried a bit, too.
Actually, I do like the new colour, but in a different way... I think the old one (with the red sky) seemed more apocalyptic... hotter, I guess. But whatever. I'll play with it more.
B.O.B.: I think you're probably right about the chunky lines. That said, even though it's probably going to hurt the piece in the end, I think I'm sticking with 'em. The whole cartoonish lack of depth thing has actually grown on me, and anyway, without the dark lines, I feel like the background and the dino don't really... I dunno... merge? Right now, despite the harm they cause, I think the consistent thick outlines give the piece some cohesion. I'm probably talking out of my ass though (as I often am) so argue with me, and I may cave yet.
Thanks for all the fine crits, guys. I think this is coming along rather well.
